[Johnny_Genome]

Somewhere Like You

I want to go
somewhere like you
beautiful warm
quiet and calm
and yet you've become
so far away
how could I traverse
such an unknown path
with these tired feet
and worn out soul

 

[lynzee]

I really like it. It's serene and meaningful without being overly wordy and forcing the depth of what it's saying.

Good poem.


Lindsay

 

[juliet21]

Thats beautiful..and i got my own meaning out of it and relate...I wonder if it is similar to your meaning.

 

[Johnny_Genome]

Much thanks.

 

[Sophieness]

I really like it too...evokes such a depth of feeling.