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Somewhere Like You

I want to go
somewhere like you
beautiful warm
quiet and calm
and yet you've become
so far away
how could I traverse
such an unknown path
with these tired feet
and worn out soul
 

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I really like it. It's serene and meaningful without being overly wordy and forcing the depth of what it's saying.

Good poem. :)


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Thats beautiful..and i got my own meaning out of it and relate...I wonder if it is similar to your meaning.
 

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I really like it too...evokes such a depth of feeling.
 
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