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ayo...yeah...uh...yo alchemist, bounce that beat son!...yeah, lemme see, lemme do this yo ;)

Lemme speak, this the song for the chosen
We're the waves in the sea, and God is the ocean
I've lost my emotion, your touch is warm but im frozen
My feet's on the path, but i cant walk cuz they're broken
I need a stronger devotion, to crawl into motion
I'm only calm if im focused
So meditation's my protection like the thorns on the roses
I'm 25...still i feel like im not a man
If i got the chance
I'd say **** the meds, just take me to the Prophet's hands
But that's not the plan, cuz we gotta save ourselves
The pain is felt, or is it imaginary like the flames in Hell?
I've seen Lucifer's eyes, he makes humans go blind
Till they cant see the Heavens past the blue in the sky
He speaks dubious lies
But im not scared, he can take this body but not this beautiful mind
Cuz it belongs to the Father
The Mother's presence wrapped around me and its stronger than armor
Each one teaches one, im just hoping that's true
Lemme take a second to write what i know about you
Youre in a crazy place, your heart's in a shady state, you hate each day
Cuz your awareness is sharper than a razor blade
Damn!...its a gift and a curse
You float in fresh water but you swim with a thirst
You live on this earth
But you didnt manifest willingly, you were tricked into birth
Youre quick to get hurt
There's many things you crave but dont think you deserve
I just wanna know what you feel when you see the sun
Those who speak to God have the voice that make the demons run
 

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WOW I loved it!!!!!! :clap :boogie :D
Were you describing yourself? I espeicaly liked the line "But you didnt manifest willingly, you were tricked into birth".
 

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"We're the waves in the sea, and God is the ocean
I've lost my emotion, your touch is warm but im frozen
My feet's on the path, but i cant walk cuz they're broken
I need a stronger devotion, to crawl into motion"

This was my favorite part of the song, great use of imagery, rhythm, and metaphor. :yes
 

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aw man, thanks a lot rca!!!...i really appreciate it!...part of this is describing myself and another part is describing people i know...thanks again! :D
 

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jeez, I wish I had your gift for words. You're really missing a trick fella. get that site!
 

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I saw two or three lines that were pretty amazing:


"If i got the chance
I'd say **** the meds, just take me to the Prophet's hands
But that's not the plan, cuz we gotta save ourselves
The pain is felt, or is it imaginary like the flames in Hell?"

Yeah, that was sick...

"Damn!...its a gift and a curse
You float in fresh water but you swim with a thirst
You live on this earth
But you didnt manifest willingly, you were tricked into birth"

Uh, yeah... siiiiiicck!!


The best part of all this is that I know you got the skills on a beat to make it sound ever better! Your choice of words are the type to have people grindge when they hear certian lines. I know I have a few times already lol. GJ once again my friend :)
 

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yikes....
 

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Youre in a crazy place, your heart's in a shady state, you hate each day
Cuz your awareness is sharper than a razor blade
Damn!...its a gift and a curse
You float in fresh water but you swim with a thirst
You live on this earth
But you didnt manifest willingly, you were tricked into birth
Youre quick to get hurt
Nice! You're very talented! :yes
 
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