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Here's a poem i wrote about SA

I am
Trapped
In a glass box
And I choke
Under a fog
Of Fear
And I am lost,
And I am scared,
And no one can hear
Me silently
Scream
As untold
Tears stream
Down
Onto my pillowcase
Hidden by
The
Darkness.

I am
Trapped
In a glass box
And I cry
When the feeling of
Loneliness
Overcomes me.
And I am unloved
And I am lonely
And nobody can see
Pain
Within my
Heart
Expressed
With
Rusty
Scissors
Along the
Secret crevices
Of my
Arm.

I am trapped…
I call and I call
And my unheard
Voice grows
Hoarse with
Calls.
Won’t anyone save me?
Because
As
The Seasons
Change
And as the
Hourglass
Moves,
I am
Trapped
And
Dying
In a
Glass box.
 

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I love the linear style, the one or two word lines are very effective. There's a lot of flesh to your poem, and by that I mean there's humanity, vulnerablity, and emotion.
 
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