[Keikei]

here is a poem i wrote for my writing class. I hope you like it.

By Moonlight

From behind the window pane,
Gazing at the night,
I look onto the scene the same,
As though I did by light,
Though by the sun things seemed to be,
So jagged and deranged,
Now by the moon, the scence I see,
Seems by the darkness changed,
The setting of the sun so bright,
Transforms the present scene,
The world, though it is only night,
Seems lovely and serene.

 

[bluerain]

I love it! the rythm is great and so is the word choice

 

[lynzee]

I really like your poem. It creates great imagery
when you read it. You deserve an A+!