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Here is poem that i just wrote one day, out of boredom, hope you like :)


It's called 'Star Juice' because i was talking with my Dad about constellations one night and he asked 'what do you think the big dipper is filled with, to which i replied 'of course they're filled with star juice." lol. Funny story..Here goes;

Sparkle drink of stars
Sure to quench your thirst
Sure to make you feel
Like you’re not of this earth
Star Juice

Golden Yellow glitz
Refreshing douse
Fresh from the galactic skies
From the Big Dipper House
Star Juice

Its mellow yellow
Above a blue hue
Formed in constellations
To make an extraordinary stew
Star Juice

The Angels drink it for their fair skin
A Goddess’s divine intervention
Perfumes sent from heaven.
Star Juice.

Star juice is what the stars make
When the sky is right and the dippers are out
You can hear it pouring like rain
From a twinkling big dippers spout

Sounds like gold glistening
Pouring from its ‘heavenly pitcher’
Out into the stars, spreading
Oil and gold, out into the darkened skies.
Spreading vastly, making it shine bright, forever.
Star Juice.


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Hey, thanks you guys :) People in here are so talented at writing, i thought this sounded so childish, it took me literally 1-2 minutes to complete because it just popped up, i seem to have poetic days every blue moon if you know what i mean.
 

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Thanks thecurerules :)
 

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I really like this poem too. I know you said 'yellow' in it a couple times, but every time I read it, I just picture lots of bright colors. It's a very good poem! :banana
 

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Thanks glittergaze :)
 

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Very cool, I like it!
 

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Nice :)
 

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Thanks everyone, thats kind of you :)
 
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