[Aliengel]

i love you are the words thats always spoken
i love you are the words i never hear
i love you are the words i'll never say to u
cus i love you are the words i've come to fear

was that good or bad? :hide
i bet it sounds droopy dont it? :hide

 

[Sophieness]

I like this a lot!! nice work.

 

[lyn01]

It's good! I like it

 

[orwen2000]

No, it doesn't sound droopy at all...
It's a good poem. So good that it sort of stuck in my mind in fact. I like it.