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Sadness in her eyes

You said I was the girl with sadness in her eyes
And promised that you'll wipe it off my face
But when you did, you came to realize
That that was why you liked me in the first place
 

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That's a neat little poem with a great twist at the ending. It's just at the right length - it leaves you guessing as to what happens after the guy discovers that it was the sadness he was attracted to all along.
Coincidentally, that's the sort of thing I've always feared would happen to me one day. I'm usually attracted to girls who seem shy and soft-spoken, but then I'm always afraid that when I get to know them they won't be so shy around me. So this poem certainly struck a nerve.
 
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