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There is a tender tremor in my heart
As if it were not on my part,
Waking up in the morning she'd say
"I had been waiting for you every day".

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying.

My fortune gives me signs and it's a start,
It is echoed in my heart,
In your hands I melt like snow and sing
Just like birds sing in the spring.

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying

We can't always be in paradise
This is something I can realize
But my heart warms up in spite of all-
You are my entire world.

Flicker of the candlelight,
I am waiting for you, my knight.
Night evokes queer feelings
But it doesn't matter, really.

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying

It's a Russian song I tried to translate into English. The Russian version is available here:


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no I dont!
I had terrible love experiences causing brain damage.
I havent loved anyone for 12 years and I never love again.
 

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Audacious romantic
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Don't we all?
Well, it's merely a song translation. The purpose of this posting is to ask about your opinions on my translation. But thanks for reading it anyway.
 

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There is a tender tremor in my heart
As if it were not on my part,
Waking up in the morning she'd say
"I had been waiting for you every day".

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying.

My fortune gives me signs and it's a start,
It is echoed in my heart,
In your hands I melt like snow and sing
Just like birds sing in the spring.

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying

We can't always be in paradise
This is something I can realize
But my heart warms up in spite of all-
You are my entire world.

Flicker of the candlelight,
I am waiting for you, my knight.
Night evokes queer feelings
But it doesn't matter, really.

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying

It's a Russian song I tried to translate into English. The Russian version is available here:


Thanks.
oh my,.......that is very good, I can see what you are thinking.:) I feel the meaning.

and I can identify with some of those thoughts there,.....there are some appropriate for me I think..

and yes....it all seems very true......it is based on one of the basic human needs.....I think most of us can identify it. but it has some sad elements though. and unfortunately a lot of us are qualified to know that sad elements...

А любить так хочется ( a lyubit tak khochetsya)...... translated as a ' a love so want' the tune is sounding a but upbeat for those meanings.....but I quite like it already! :)
 

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oh my,.......that is very good, I can see what you are thinking.:) I feel the meaning.

and I can identify with some of those thoughts there,.....there are some appropriate for me I think..

and yes....it all seems very true......it is based on one of the basic human needs.....I think most of us can identify it. but it has some sad elements though. and unfortunately a lot of us are qualified to know that sad elements...

А любить так хочется ( a lyubit tak khochetsya)...... translated as a ' a love so want' the tune is sounding a but upbeat for those meanings.....but I quite like it already! :)
Thank you so much! This song is really in tune with my soul.
 

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Nice translation, especially getting everything to rhyme in another language. I highlighted a word you might want to find a synonym for, in case this song will ever be performed in front of middle-schoolers!
Well, in the Russian version in that part of the song they mentioned that night may make one feel strange and unusual about some things and say some useless words that do not mean anything. Perhaps some synonyms would do here, you are right.
 

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I refuse to believe in Love .

That is .... until someone can come up with solid and concrete evidence for its existence .
HMM.......i think it exists sometimes.....but maybe some times it is fleeting.......sometimes I love myself.....sometimes I don't.....but maybe that is a different type of it.
 

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I only said it because queer is another word for homosexual, so it would make immature people giggle.
Oh, I am so sorry. Sometimes I come across some words with double meanings - the ones that have some "naughty" meanings too.
 

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There is a tender tremor in my heart
As if it were not on my part,
Waking up in the morning she'd say
"I had been waiting for you every day".

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying.

My fortune gives me signs and it's a start,
It is echoed in my heart,
In your hands I melt like snow and sing
Just like birds sing in the spring.

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying

We can't always be in paradise
This is something I can realize
But my heart warms up in spite of all-
You are my entire world.

Flicker of the candlelight,
I am waiting for you, my knight.
Night evokes queer feelings
But it doesn't matter, really.

I crave very much for love but I only get the pain,
Here I am lonely now cause all went wrong again.
I crave very much for love, with all my being
Go away unhappy fate, I am not just saying

It's a Russian song I tried to translate into English. The Russian version is available here:


Thanks.
Very impressive! :D Did you use a computer application to translate this or a thesaurus?
 

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love does exist. if you don't believe then there's a issue. > . < yup said it. I'm a realist.
 

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