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Poetry is not realy my thing so this is my first real attempt at it. I know it’s not very good but I would appreciate ideas on how to make it better.

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Silent Tears

I hurt so badly
Deep down in my soul
My privet pain going untold
No one to help me
No one to hold me
So I cry silent tears

They fall heavy like stones
I cry them quietly
I cry them alone
So no one judges my pain
So no one judges me

Years of agony rush out
In my silent tears
Like a boiling torrent
That no one hears

I can't live
It hurts too much
I can't die
I’m all ready dead
So all I can do is cry
Silent tears
 

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Sounds good
 

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privet = private

all ready = already

besides that its perfect
 
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