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Something I wrote last night for my just recent Ex-girlfriend. Tell me your honest opinion.. thanks!

The most painful part in knowing
That there's nothing left to say,
Is realizing that I had that chance
And let it fall away...

You truly do not fathom
The presence you have in me.
Unknown why it seems impossible
But someday you may see.

Rewind to the beginning.. I wish
In the past, that rainy night.
Nothing would I change in you;
In me, a self-inflicting spite..

The most painful part is knowing
These, my final words to say,
That there's nothing I can do
To make you feel this way.
 

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Your poem is very good, and also touching.
I like the way you started the last stanza the
same as the first. Flows good. :)
 
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