Social Anxiety Support Forum banner

1 - 1 of 1 Posts

·
Banned
Joined
·
125 Posts
Discussion Starter · #1 ·
Okay, I had to write a screenplay for my storyboarding class. And it has to be read outloud to the class so I'm just wondering...

EXT – CONCENTRAION CAMP – CAMP ENTRENCE – DAY
Establishing shot of an entrance of a German concentration camp. With some bird chipping making it look really peaceful. Showing text on screen saying 2009.
EXT – CONCENTRAION CAMP – RANDOM AREA IN THE CAMP – DAY
Three guys hanging out in the concentration camp. Then they start talking to each other walking looking at the sight of the concentration camp.
Tim
It’s so depressing in here.
Brent
Actually now that you mention it. I’m feeling pretty depressed here too.
Chris
Same here. Actually I’ve felt this way ever since we entered this place.
Tim
Actually that’s about the same time mine came on.
Brent
Same here.
Chris
I guess it’s not that surprising when you think about the evil past this place has had.
Tim
Yeah, that alone is pretty depressing. Hopefully that kind of thing won’t happen again. But I don’t think that’s what’s making me depressed right now.
Brent
That’s true, this doesn’t feel like a normal depression. Could there be an evil presence here like a ghost or something?
Tim
That’s crap, ghosts don’t exist.
Chris
Who knows? I mean it’s possible.
Tim
Science has proven ghosts don’t exist.
Brent
Science isn’t able to explain everything. Sometimes you just gotta go by faith and stuff like that.
Chris
Yeah, some things just require faith.
Tim
So you guys have faith that we’re gonna attacked by ghosts then?
Brent
That’s not what I meant.
Chris
Anyway, let’s just get moving.
INT – CONCENTRAION CAMP – PEOPLE HOLDING AREA – DAY
The guys are looking at the bedroom area of where the slaves where held at. There were stony walls, beds made with hey. With kinda translucent ghosts hanging around Tim.
Chris
Wow, the way they lived must have sucked. I feel sorry for them.
Brent
Yeah, me too.
Tim
Me three.
Then one of the Ghosts that where surrounding tim attacked tim. By holding where his legs as they were so he couldn’t make any movements.

Tim
Huh, I can’t move?
Brent
Did you say something Tim?
Tim
No, I didn’t say anything. Only that I just can’t freaking move.
Chris
Haha, nice try. Your just faking it aren’t you?
Tim
Do I sound like I’m faking it?
Brent
Actually, you do sound like your faking it.
Tim
Well I’m not.
The ghost that was attacking starts to crush tim’s legs breaking his bones in his legs. Then the Ghost lets go of tim’s legs. Then tim falls down.
Tim
Oh crap that hurts.
Chris
What hurts?
Tim
My legs, I think they are broken. Like something crushed my legs or something.
Brent
Okay, let’s get you some help.
 
1 - 1 of 1 Posts
Top