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Darkness is here
I can feel it
Coming to take me away
Darkness is here

Pull the blankets over my head
I am scared
Hoping to be spared
Darkness is here

Boots that clang
Untied laces
Unloosened belt
Breath on my cheek
Palm on my cheek

Darkness covers me
Impudent language
Beer for breath

"Father don't"
My last words

Youth departed
My soul captured
And taken away
Thanks to my prey


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That is really quite good. I just posted something with light and dark imagery, and I want you to know its not a response to your poem. I wrote the thing I posted months ago and just found it again.

But anyway, yours was really powerful.
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