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post #117 of (permalink) Old 06-14-2018, 04:25 PM
Fun Spirit
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Well I didn't offered but I was asked to help someone I know with a play he is trying to write. His idea was good but the story had a lot of holes in it. But that is not what had me wondering. Something in his story had me wondering so I mention that thing to him mostly in an email in addition to his story having holes in it. Overall I told him to re-write it and to really think about certain things in his play. I think he may become offended with my small feedback. {I haven't even sent him my whole in depth feedback}

He did sought me because I do write. He asked me for help and so I am offering my best honest opinion.
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